here is a song that i wrote, please provide feedback on it!
Capo on third fret:
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying away.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay dying I'm dying today.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay wasting, I'm wasting away.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping I pray.
A G D E
I pray for joy, I pray for peace, I pray for everything, everything that brings me life.
A G D E
I pray for truth, I pray for love, I pray for anything, anything that works.
A G D E
I pray for joy, I pray for peace, I pray for truth, and i pray for love.
A G D E
I pray for love, I pray for life, I pray for life, and I pray for you.
A G D E
Because you, you're all I want, you're all I have, and you're all I need.
A G D E
You, you're killing me, you're killing me, from the inside out.
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A G D E
Because of you, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying for you.
A G D E
Because of you, here I lay, here I lay dying, I'm dying for you.
A G D E
Because of you, here I lay, here I lay wasting, wasting my time
A G D E
Because of you, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping I live.
A G D E
Because I, I want to live, I want to live, live for you.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying away.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay dying I'm dying today.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay wasting, I'm wasting away.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping I pray.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying for you.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay dying, I'm dying for you.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay wasting, wasting my time.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping for you.
A G D E
Because I, I want to live, I want to live, live for you.
A G D E
So here, here I lay, here I lay writing, writing this song.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay crying, I'm crying away.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay dying, I'm dying today.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay wasting, I'm wasting away.
A G D E
Here, here I lay, here I lay hoping, hoping I pray.
