Escape The Fate - My Apocalypse Chords & Tabs

This is the solo for My Apocalypse I looked at the other tabs they didnt look right i 
the whole song done but when i came to the solo it wasnt right so i did it myself i thinks 
right

Slow
D-12---------12---------13---------13---------------------------------------|
A---10-12-13---10-12-13---10-12-13---10-12-13---15-10-12-13---15-10-12-13---|
F---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|

D-15--------17--------------------------------------------------------------|
A---10-12-13--10-12-13------------------------------------------------------|
F---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|

Intermediate
D-12---------12---------12---------12---------13---------13-----------------|
A---10-12-13---10-12-13---10-12-13---10-12-13---10-12-13---10-12-13---------|
F---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|

D-13--------13---------------------------------------------------------------|
A---10-12-13--10-12-13---15-10-12-13---15-10-12-13--15-10-12-13--15-10-12-13-|
F----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
[ Tab from: https://www.guitartabs.cc/tabs/e/escape_the_fate/my_apocalypse_tab_ver_4.html ]
D-15---------15--------15---------17*---------------------------------------|
A---10-12-13---10-12-13--10-12-13-------------------------------------------|
F---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
Fast
D-12------8-times-13-----8-times---------8-times-15------4-times-17--4-------|times
A---10/13-----------10/13--------15-10/13----------10/13-----------10/13-----|
F----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C----------------------------------------------------------------------------|

D-8-5-8-5-7-5-5-5-7-5-5-5-7-5-5-0-5-0----------------------------------------|
A----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
F----------------------------------------------------------------------------|x4
C----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C----------------------------------------------------------------------------|

D-13p0-12p0-8p0-7p0-8p0-7p0-5p0-7p0------------------------------------------|
A----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
F----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C----------------------------------------------------------------------------|x3
G----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C----------------------------------------------------------------------------|

D-8-0-0-7-0-0-5-0-0-7-0-5-0-5-0---------------------------------------------|
A---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
F---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G---------------------------------------------------------------------------|
C---------------------------------------------------------------------------|