Misc Unsigned Bands - Montage - Rise Chords & Tabs

This is a riff i came up with for my band. Tell me what you think of it
[ Tab from: https://www.guitartabs.cc/tabs/m/misc_unsigned_bands/montage_rise_tab.html ]
e|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|-----------------------------5----6-------------------------------------------|
E|-------0-2-3-0-2-3-0-2-3b----------------0-2-3-0-2-3-0-2-3b-----------------|
Repeat 4x

e|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
B|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
G|----------------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|----------------------------------------------------------------5-7---------|
A|------------------5-------------------5-7--------------------5-7------------|
E|-5-7----5-7----5-7----5-7---5-5----5-7-------5-7----5-7----5-7--------------|