Orianthi - Shut Up And Kiss Me Solo Chords & Tabs

So I tabbed the Shut Up and Kiss Me solo in the original tab...but it was kinda wrong.  
is the version I believe is much more correct.

e|--------------24~-----11b12r11~---9---------|
B|/14~--14p12---------9-----------9---12b14~--|
G|-----------13-------------------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------|
A|--------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------|

For this part the notes are actually whammied Steve Vai styled, but my guitar has a
bridge so I don't know how to do it myself.  Heres how I do it on my guitar

e|9-8b9r7-6b7r4-------------------------------|
B|--------------7b8r7-5h7s8b9r2----4/14~------|
G|--------------------------------------------|
D|--------------------------------------------|
A|--------------------------------------------|
E|--------------------------------------------|
Eerg you can barely hear this part...
e|--------------------------------------------------|
B|-------------------------------7-----9h10p9p7 7b9-|
G|--------------------6h8-6h8--9---9p8--------------|
D|----------6h7-6h7h9----9--------------------------|
A|6h7-6h7h9----8------------------------------------|
E|---9----------------------------------------------|
[ Tab from: https://www.guitartabs.cc/tabs/o/orianthi/shut_up_and_kiss_me_solo_tab.html ]
e|-------9-9-----------------11-11----------------12-12----------|
B|/12b14----/12b14\--/14b16~-----/14b16\--/15b17~-----/15b17\----|
G|---------------------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------------------|
To help you tap this the method I advise is keeping your index finger on the 9th fret of 
e and B strings, tapping the 16's with your right hand, while hitting both 12's ob both 
with either your middle or ring finger.
      T           T           T           T
e|----16-12p9-----16-12p9-----16-12p9-----16-12p9----|
B|12---------12p9--------12p9--------12p9--------12p9|
G|---------------------------------------------------|
D|---------------------------------------------------|
A|---------------------------------------------------|
E|---------------------------------------------------|
  T     T    T     T    T    T    T    T    T    T    T    T    T
e|16p12-16p9--------------------------------------------------------|
B|-----------14p12-14p9-12p7-12p5-12p7-12p5-12p4-12p5-12p4-12p2-12p4|
G|------------------------------------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------------------------------------|
E|------------------------------------------------------------------|

e|------------------------------------|
B|12p2-0h2p0--------------------------|
G|------------------------------------|
D|------------------------------------|
A|------------------------------------|
E|------------------------------------|


*then whammy...dont have one but id imagine you need to make the strings real lax
for that part....